I am working on my dialogue. Just in chapter one for now. Some of the things my How-to book says to watch out for is unneeded dialogue, too many 'he saids she saids', and also to watch out that the child sounds like a child, not an adult. This is all such good advice!
I am amazed at how much I have changed in just Chapter one! Kinda makes me think I'm writing a pile of crap! Hahaha! But, no, I really think this will be a great children's story....some day. :)
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